English2019

 The adverb sentence

Curiously , Quickly , Rapidly , Often , Importantly , Technically

, Firstly , Lastly , Remarkably , Similarly , Significantly , Surprisingly , Readily

Unexpectedly , The cat barked

Unexpectedly , The Pig Flew

Rapidly , The Dog Ran

Begin with a preposition

Preposition are words that indicate movement or position.

Against , Under , Above , In , At , Throughout , Behind , Over , Prior , Beyond

After The Photo Was Taken, The Camera Flashed

In The Greenhouse , The Plants Slowly Grew

Basic Body Paragraph 1

Point > State the point you with to make

Evidence > Provide evidence to support your point - 2-3 sentences/2-3 sentences that give evidence to your point 

Explain > 3-4 Sentences that explain your evidence in relation to your point/question.

Link > Back to your point - 1-2 sentences - To the next paragraph - 1 sentence

Point > Books are better than movies - Everyone knows its better to read the book that watch the movie.

Evidence > For example , The movie made of Wonder is very different from the book. It leaves out lots of information. In the book that main teacher is female but in the move they are male. Also the camp incident  missed out the info about Auggies hearing aide.

Explain > This incident made more sense in the book because he was bullied for having his 'lobo ears' which made his look different. It didn't make sense to bully him in the movie without them.

Link > For these reasons , the book was clearly better that the movie . However , you can enjoy the movie without reading the book.

The -ed start

Committed , Undaunted , Determined , Forced , Gifted , Blighted , Thrilled , Delighted , Blessed , Overpowered , Drafted , Surprised , Foreshadowed

Determined to beat their opponents , The players scored a goal
Defeated by the opponent , The Player gave up

The 'W' Start
Who , While , Whilst , When , Where , What , Whereas

When the bell rang , I continued my work
While I was at the game , My family was at a dinner party.

Point > School uniforms are a waste of time and money.

Evidence > School uniforms are a waste of time and money . They waste time and money because you can only wear them for school and nothing outside of school . If you change schools you have to pay more money.

Explain > Uniforms can be damaged easily and you grow out of them so you waste your time and your money because you have to pay for more uniforms clothing anyways. In my opinion , School uniforms only help students not get bullied for there sense of style in clothes . 


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Preposition
After the photo was taken , The camera flashed
Adverb
Unexpectedly , The cat barked
-ed start
Determined to beat their opponents , The players scored a goal
The 'W' start
While I was at the game , My family was at a dinner party.

The -ing start
Deciding , Speaking , Seeing , Grasping , Rising , Looking , Holding , Emerging , Taking , Signalling , Analysing , Talking 
e.g Talking about military successes , One must include Alexander the Great

Signalling for help , The survivors flashed a torch
Rising from the night , The sun rose

Adverb
Rapidly , The dog ran
Preposition
After the photo was taken , The camera flashed
-ed start
Committed to the team , The team captain came 2 hours early to practise
Ing start
Emerging from the cave , The bear woke up
'W' Start
While I was watching Television , The doorbell rang

Q - Quote , Rhetorical Question 

T - Title of your book

A - Author of your book

K - Key argument 

O - Outline


Example -
Have you ever lived through an invasion?
In John Marsden's 'Tomorrow When The War Began' eight young Australians venture into the bush , Only to return and discover an unknown face has invaded their town . A memorable idea from this text is that of courage .  We see the characters show courage at first when they venture to the showgrounds . Next , When they rescue Lee after he is shot , and finally when they blow up the town bridge . These are memorable to the reader because they show the importance of courage to achieve things.

P - Courage is first shown when Ellie , Kevin and Corrie visit the show ground.
E - Tell me what happened
E - Fear overcome = Courage
L - This incident shows that courage is a memorable idea in the text because without courage they wouldn't know if their families are safe.

Mirror Conclusion
The idea of courage is memorable in John Marsden's Tomorrow When The War Began. This essay has shown courage was needed when the children visit the showground , rescue Lee and blow up the town bridge . These incidents show that courage is memorable because .

Unihockey

 On a scale of 1 to , rate yourself on how well you participated in the  previous lesson , 10 being the whole time .

10/10

Why did you rate yourself the way you did?

Because I participated in everything , Even if I didn't feel comfortable I still did it.

What do you think you did well?

Participate more often , Because I used to hate doing anything physical because I got too nervous.

What skills did you use to accomplish posing and dribbling?

Used the Unihockey stick to block off the attackers .

What do you think you need to improve upon the next time? What strategies will you use?

People got the ball sometimes so try and run with the ball so they have a less of a chance of getting it.

Tomorrow When The War Began - Critical Literacy

What Views of The World is This Text Presenting?
Tomorrow When The War Began is based in the country Australia , But Tomorrow When The War Began can represent what is happening in the countries in Asia & Africa.

How Would The Text be Different if it were Told in Another Time , Place or Culture?
The book would be viewed differently and the views and thoughts of people would be different . The would be more laws told in the book and if in a different culture there would be different religions and traditions?

What Kinds of Social Realities Does This Text Portray?
What teenagers go through their years with and that the war crisis happening in Tomorrow When The War Began is happening in countries in continent Africa and Asia.

What Genre Does This Text Belong to?
Action , Drama , Romance (Sort of) and Thriller.

Human Trafficking

                              Human Trafficking

Where is this happening?
Human Trafficking is happening all around Asian countries , Like Equatorial Guinea , Eritrea , Iran , North Korea and more.

What are the key reasons for Human Trafficking?
The purpose behind Human Trafficking is because for the purpose of exploiting the prostitution of others , sexual exploitation , forced labour and slavery , as well as the removal of their organs .

How can this happen?
According to Human Trafficking websites , To my understanding , They tell me that the cause of the starting of Human Trafficking is because of kidnapping and capturing Men , Woman and Children , by force if they don't follow orders .

Who can this happen to?
This happens to Men , Woman and Children of all ages and sizes . Man , Woman and Children satisfy the people that stole them . Mostly Woman and young children are used for the sexual purposes , The men are mostly used for oils and mines.

Why does human trafficking occur & how does this take away human rights & freedom?

SEEL Paragraph
Human Trafficking takes away both human rights and freedom because , people buy humans lives like they have no emotion and feeling , like items only to satisfy themselves . Woman and Children , Especially young girls , are most of the time used for sexual purposes , and normally forced in to marriage at young aged . This takes away children right to have an education and a proper childhood. An example is when some young children are working in mining , oiling , child slavery or child soldiers they have their right to have an education and have a childhood with the right to have freedom and right to speak their mind on what they think.

10 Worst Countries Using Child Soldiers

Child Soldiers

Where is this taking place?

According to the video clip it is happening in Malaysia , Indonesia and the Philippines .

10 Worst Countries Using Child Soldiers
What is Child Soldiers?
Child Soldier is when children at very young ages lose their childhood because they are being used for child soldiers . They can go and follow the orders of their instructors or if not then they are forced and captured by them. The meaning behind having child soldiers is , according to Google , That they use them for sexual purposes , and of course to defend their country . But the reason they use children instead of adults is that they are much smaller in size , so they are much easier to handle , and can force and capture them when they want to.

Write a sentence about what your map is showing?
This map above is showing not only the countries using child soldiers , but they are the most extreme and most serious . They use the most force .


SEEL Paragraph
Why are children used in war & how does this take away their human rights? They use child soldiers for their sexual purposes , The females get married to the older soldiers , Men take younger girls and force them into marriage But there is another reason , that other reason is because children are much easier to handle . They are much less in weight and height so they have more of a chance of succeeding on kidnapping child soldiers . The child soldiers get given guns and weapons for war . They go against another country and accurate chances of at least 25 children losing their lives in each war as well as maimed . Child soldiers appear in Afghanistan , Sudan  , Somalia and Yemen , there are more countries as well . I don't understand why they just marry the love of their life and end war so their is peace . This is the reason why many countries around Asia have appeared using Child Soldiers . 

Mathmatics

Going To Koro Whare.

Problem 1 

It's 5km from Jordan's whare to where his Koro lives . It's uphill on the way so he can only cycle 10kph but he can do 20kph on the way back . Jordan leaves his whare at 6pm . How long can he stop at his Koro's whare is he want to be back home for his favourite television at 7pm?

It will take him 45 minutes altogether. 30 minutes to get their and 15 minutes there. He will have to leave at 5:30pm and have 40 minutes at his Koro's and 15 minutes to get home and 5 minutes to get ready for his television.

1.

What were the main mathematical concepts or ideas that you learned or we discussed in class?

Pi , Diameter and Circumference .

2.

What questions do you still have?

I learned everything I need to know except some of Pi and stuff.

3.

Describe a mistake or misconception that you or a classmate had in class. What did you learn from this mistake or misconception?

When we first learned about Pi , Diameter and Circumference , I didn't understand what they were until my group told me and I started to ask questions.

4.

What new vocabulary words or terms were introduced?

Diameter , Circumference and Pi . I heard of them but didn't know what they were.

10 Worst Countries For Child Labour

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Child Labour - Child labour is when you work children to the bone , this includes taking away their human rights . Out of working for slavery and child labour they get very little money for the amount of work they do . They get 100 Rupees every 1200 bricks they make. 

This Map is showing where the most affected places in the world where child labour is . The places where the children can be as young as the age of 5+.

Child labour is a serious case that is happening to this very day . This happens because one of the mains reasons I have learnt that it has happened is because of the adults that have children . Some people all around the world can't afford things like shelter , warmth , food and drinks , so the parents that live in the country with child labour go to moneylenders for help , they ask them if they could borrow some money for whichever they need if for and after a while the moneylenders come back to them and ask for them to repay what they have owed . Most of them are not able to pay so they sell their children off into child labour to slave for the people they call their masters. The children have no choice but to go along with it because their parents are still their guardians so they still kind of own still so what they say goes . Child labour takes away children human rights by taking away their right to have freedom , and a lot of children want to have an education for full time but they can't because of this child labour . Lawyers and many others around the world are trying to stop this child labour and fighting against the masters of child labour . Lawyers as well are to this day are still trying to stop child labour