The adverb sentence
Curiously , Quickly , Rapidly , Often , Importantly , Technically
, Firstly , Lastly , Remarkably , Similarly , Significantly , Surprisingly , Readily
Unexpectedly , The cat barked
Unexpectedly , The Pig Flew
Rapidly , The Dog Ran
Begin with a preposition
Preposition are words that indicate movement or position.
Against , Under , Above , In , At , Throughout , Behind , Over , Prior , Beyond
After The Photo Was Taken, The Camera Flashed
In The Greenhouse , The Plants Slowly Grew
Basic Body Paragraph 1
Point > State the point you with to make
Evidence > Provide evidence to support your point - 2-3 sentences/2-3 sentences that give evidence to your point
Explain > 3-4 Sentences that explain your evidence in relation to your point/question.
Link > Back to your point - 1-2 sentences - To the next paragraph - 1 sentence
Point > Books are better than movies - Everyone knows its better to read the book that watch the movie.
Evidence > For example , The movie made of Wonder is very different from the book. It leaves out lots of information. In the book that main teacher is female but in the move they are male. Also the camp incident missed out the info about Auggies hearing aide.
Explain > This incident made more sense in the book because he was bullied for having his 'lobo ears' which made his look different. It didn't make sense to bully him in the movie without them.
Link > For these reasons , the book was clearly better that the movie . However , you can enjoy the movie without reading the book.
The -ed start
The -ed start
Committed , Undaunted , Determined , Forced , Gifted , Blighted , Thrilled , Delighted , Blessed , Overpowered , Drafted , Surprised , Foreshadowed
Determined to beat their opponents , The players scored a goal
Defeated by the opponent , The Player gave up
The 'W' Start
Who , While , Whilst , When , Where , What , Whereas
When the bell rang , I continued my work
While I was at the game , My family was at a dinner party.
Point > School uniforms are a waste of time and money.
Evidence > School uniforms are a waste of time and money . They waste time and money because you can only wear them for school and nothing outside of school . If you change schools you have to pay more money.
Explain > Uniforms can be damaged easily and you grow out of them so you waste your time and your money because you have to pay for more uniforms clothing anyways. In my opinion , School uniforms only help students not get bullied for there sense of style in clothes .
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Preposition
After the photo was taken , The camera flashed
Adverb
Unexpectedly , The cat barked
-ed start
Determined to beat their opponents , The players scored a goal
The 'W' start
While I was at the game , My family was at a dinner party.
The -ing start
Deciding , Speaking , Seeing , Grasping , Rising , Looking , Holding , Emerging , Taking , Signalling , Analysing , Talking
e.g Talking about military successes , One must include Alexander the Great
Signalling for help , The survivors flashed a torch
Rising from the night , The sun rose
Adverb
Rapidly , The dog ran
Preposition
After the photo was taken , The camera flashed
-ed start
Committed to the team , The team captain came 2 hours early to practise
Ing start
Emerging from the cave , The bear woke up
'W' Start
While I was watching Television , The doorbell rang
Q - Quote , Rhetorical Question
T - Title of your book
A - Author of your book
K - Key argument
O - Outline
Example -
Have you ever lived through an invasion?
In John Marsden's 'Tomorrow When The War Began' eight young Australians venture into the bush , Only to return and discover an unknown face has invaded their town . A memorable idea from this text is that of courage . We see the characters show courage at first when they venture to the showgrounds . Next , When they rescue Lee after he is shot , and finally when they blow up the town bridge . These are memorable to the reader because they show the importance of courage to achieve things.
P - Courage is first shown when Ellie , Kevin and Corrie visit the show ground.
E - Tell me what happened
E - Fear overcome = Courage
L - This incident shows that courage is a memorable idea in the text because without courage they wouldn't know if their families are safe.
Mirror Conclusion
The idea of courage is memorable in John Marsden's Tomorrow When The War Began. This essay has shown courage was needed when the children visit the showground , rescue Lee and blow up the town bridge . These incidents show that courage is memorable because .
Determined to beat their opponents , The players scored a goal
Defeated by the opponent , The Player gave up
The 'W' Start
Who , While , Whilst , When , Where , What , Whereas
When the bell rang , I continued my work
While I was at the game , My family was at a dinner party.
Point > School uniforms are a waste of time and money.
Evidence > School uniforms are a waste of time and money . They waste time and money because you can only wear them for school and nothing outside of school . If you change schools you have to pay more money.
Explain > Uniforms can be damaged easily and you grow out of them so you waste your time and your money because you have to pay for more uniforms clothing anyways. In my opinion , School uniforms only help students not get bullied for there sense of style in clothes .
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Preposition
After the photo was taken , The camera flashed
Adverb
Unexpectedly , The cat barked
-ed start
Determined to beat their opponents , The players scored a goal
The 'W' start
While I was at the game , My family was at a dinner party.
The -ing start
Deciding , Speaking , Seeing , Grasping , Rising , Looking , Holding , Emerging , Taking , Signalling , Analysing , Talking
e.g Talking about military successes , One must include Alexander the Great
Signalling for help , The survivors flashed a torch
Rising from the night , The sun rose
Adverb
Rapidly , The dog ran
Preposition
After the photo was taken , The camera flashed
-ed start
Committed to the team , The team captain came 2 hours early to practise
Ing start
Emerging from the cave , The bear woke up
'W' Start
While I was watching Television , The doorbell rang
Q - Quote , Rhetorical Question
T - Title of your book
A - Author of your book
K - Key argument
O - Outline
Example -
Have you ever lived through an invasion?
In John Marsden's 'Tomorrow When The War Began' eight young Australians venture into the bush , Only to return and discover an unknown face has invaded their town . A memorable idea from this text is that of courage . We see the characters show courage at first when they venture to the showgrounds . Next , When they rescue Lee after he is shot , and finally when they blow up the town bridge . These are memorable to the reader because they show the importance of courage to achieve things.
P - Courage is first shown when Ellie , Kevin and Corrie visit the show ground.
E - Tell me what happened
E - Fear overcome = Courage
L - This incident shows that courage is a memorable idea in the text because without courage they wouldn't know if their families are safe.
Mirror Conclusion
The idea of courage is memorable in John Marsden's Tomorrow When The War Began. This essay has shown courage was needed when the children visit the showground , rescue Lee and blow up the town bridge . These incidents show that courage is memorable because .
Ok that is good but no title, if u did add a title then I don't see it
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Hey Jnaya! I really like how you added a lot of information to your work! I think if you added a tit;e it would be really good, Keep up the good work! Also why does it say mijieli posted it?
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